Recorded a song/video with my friend's daughter

icezombie · Oct 7, 2016

We are going to play this song next week at a large Halloween party. It's sort of a macabre themed event called "Cirque du Noir" held at an old factory. The song has sort of a spooky vibe which should fit in nicely with the feel of the night.

She is 14 and an aspiring singer. Looking for feedback and also to get her some views on her Youtube page. If anyone can take a listen it would mean a lot to her (and me).

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CnBVVF9VlvA

Verse 13 · Oct 8, 2016

Very cool! The guitar riff gives off a horror country/psychobilly vibe, which immediately sets the mood. Perfect for your upcoming event! I've been playing guitar for 18 years, so I'd like to think I know a good riff from a bad one.

The vocals are excellent, and match the guitar perfectly. I think she has a ton of potential for a 14 year old! From listening to her vocals, I can tell she has a great ear, and would probably be very good at picking up any instrument and learning it on the fly. I hope she already has a singing instructor/coach to help push her limits, and perfect her craft!

Best of luck to the both of you.

acutermints · Oct 8, 2016

with the right costuming it will be cool, we would like to see the finished product

Dulcet Jones · Oct 8, 2016

I really liked that, but I have one suggestion: it felt a bit rushed in parts, if you could experiment a bit with bringing the tempo down so she can really emphasize the vocals I think it would be way creepier. Just a thought. Otherwise, great guitar work and vocals.

icezombie · Oct 8, 2016

Thanks for taking a listen and for all the great feedback, everyone! Very much appreciated. I will definitely show these posts to Lauren. She will be thrilled.

icezombie · Oct 8, 2016

Good advice, Dulcet, thank you!! I checked out your music on your page by the way. Great stuff!

Yoraidragon · Oct 10, 2016

Sounds great

, she sings well with the instrumental as well. She has a bright future ahead of her, if she keeps it up! I can definitely see her singing in movie themes too.

icezombie · Oct 12, 2016

Yoraidragon said:
Sounds great , she sings well with the instrumental as well. She has a bright future ahead of her, if she keeps it up! I can definitely see her singing in movie themes too.

Awesome, thanks so much!! I will share the feedback with her.