[helixtheklown]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E055KYs4AV8

 

[naberhoodhaunts]

i would cut the amount of black screen in between screams. I would also put in what your haunt is going to be like, scenes that you will have,pics of actual actors.

 

[boo who?]

Yeah.... maybe cut the time on the black.

What about the old pics- nice and long as you have them- with reeeal fast cuts to something more gruesome spliced in? like the bloody hand... then a body... an actor...or a bloody knife...

Looks good tho! Those old pics are creeeeeepy!

 

[dixie]

Love the music, and the aged filter making it look like old reels... I agree with cutting those two black sections just by a second or two to keep the viewer entranced, and the only other thing is it might be hard to read the words in the last two frames, especially October 2009.

Just tiny little nit picky things, but overall, thats a great video... the whispering and music are just great, and the old pics are like Boo said, really creeeeeepy. Great job!

 

[rockplayson]

I thought it was a cool. It diden't appear scary to me but it was fun to watch.

 

[Terra]

Oooh, neat. Love the scary pictures of a carnival and the name is perfect. Totally twisted commercial. I'd be there.

 

[helixtheklown]

Love the music, and the aged filter making it look like old reels... I agree with cutting those two black sections just by a second or two to keep the viewer entranced, and the only other thing is it might be hard to read the words in the last two frames, especially October 2009.

Just tiny little nit picky things, but overall, thats a great video... the whispering and music are just great, and the old pics are like Boo said, really creeeeeepy. Great job!

Thanks for the feedback! I'll try on perfecting it with cutting the black scenes and such out. Thanks!

 

[helixtheklown]

Oooh, neat. Love the scary pictures of a carnival and the name is perfect. Totally twisted commercial. I'd be there.

Haha Thank you very much!

 

[helixtheklown]

Yeah.... maybe cut the time on the black.

What about the old pics- nice and long as you have them- with reeeal fast cuts to something more gruesome spliced in? like the bloody hand... then a body... an actor...or a bloody knife...

Looks good tho! Those old pics are creeeeeepy!

Thanks so much for the advice!

 

[Junit]

Nice! I love the aged look. It makes me think of Chippewa Lake, it's close to where I live and is an abandoned amusement park... I wanted to go back this summer and take more photos but sadly, it is being torn down.
Anyways, I loved the aged movie reel look. I agree with others about cutting the black frames down. Also the date at the end could be bigger, it begins to get lost for those of us with poor eyesight Loved it Very ncie job!