[KingOfHalloween]

Hey!!! I am getting ready to drop an "online commercial" I made for my local Fundraiser/Party.
I just wanted to get your guys' feedback since I have never made any kind of video before in my life.
Also feel free to use this thread and share any other Halloween Party Invitation Videos you've made before or for this year!

 

[dane82]

i'm at work without sound, but from the thumbnail, i'm gonna play grammar nazi--i'd go with "to which you are invited" rather than "in which you are invited to."

 

[KingOfHalloween]

LOL, Thank you for critiquing my video without actually watching it!