Halloween Forum banner

Dilema over theme and invites!

1053 4
I originally was thinking of being a victorian style vampire with top hat and victorian dress) for our annual Halloween party, but then found a great dress that I can actually use the same top hat with and be an evil circus ringleader. I have another party to attend as well so was going to go as one to my party and the other one to my friends party. The probem is that I can't decide what theme to do for my party. I made ROUGH drafts of two invitations and thought I could get some input from you all.

Vampire:
With vampires amiss at the Hulbert House
it will be the perfect Halloween night
to have some fun and play
or give someone a fright

There is plenty to sink your teeth into
and enough to quench your thirst
But, dont be caught without a costume
or your ride home might just be a hearst

So leave the lil' sucklings at home
don't want to give them a shock
The 17th of October is it
the feast begins at 8 o'clock

If being a vampire is not in your blood don't fear
all ghouls and guys are welcome here
but if the main course you don't wish to be
I'd bring this stake along with me!

The idea is to have the invitation wrapped around a wooden stake


Evil Carnival:

Something Wicked this way comes...

A cursed carnival draws near
and will surely conjur up some fear

There is plenty of food and drinks to share
So come in costume to this sinister fair

Be sure to leave the kiddies at home this night
wouldn't want to give them a fright

With games designed to "Tempt your Fate"
and prizes for best costumes...you best not be late

This ride arrives on the 17th of October
so at 8 o'clock make your way on over

The Hulbert House is where the fun begins
please let us know if you are able to attend

Again these are very rough drafts so no spelling grammatical checks yet! Any input would be appreciated.
Top