Thread: Invitation wording suggestions

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I have been so busy doing all my other stuff for my party, I forgot about invitations!! I have to mail them out next week so, I would love to get your opinions on the wording I put together. I always have a graveyard in the yard. The Vampire's Lair is what you see when you enter the front door and then I have the witches kitchen so, tell me what you think.. Thanks in advance for any suggestions.

Enter the graveyard if you dare
Past the ghosts to the vampire’s lair.
Protect your neck from Dracula’s bite
and try to survive this horror filled night!!

In the witch’s kitchen you shall find
snacks and goodies of the spookiest kind.
Soda and beer served by an old crone
If you want something special, please bring your own.

Prizes for those with a creative knack
A prize for best costume and scariest snack
Bring your favorite fiend we’ll help seal their fate
8pm is the time, Oct 23rd is the date!

I like it, Good Job!

Only thing I would change is the third line from the bottom to read.
"Such as best costume or scariest snack"
That way you don't see prize twice.
Great Job!

Love it! Great wording!

Nice job. I agree about not reusing the word.