Thread: 2009 INVITE - REC/Quarantine Spin

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Here is my invite for this year. Guests will get this personalized letter with the enclosed video. Please give me feedback as I can still change it.
Thanks


Memo Portion
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Video Portion
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kenswift:

YOU ARE MY NEW HERO!!!!

That is absolutely sick and twisted....and of course I mean that in the nicest sort of way. Kudos to your family, especially Bella, I can see an Oscar in her future.

Great idea, brilliantly executed.

Excellent work, just excellent.

ZOMG! That is the BEST!! Ok, we were pondering doing an old west/ghost town theme, but I'm feeling gigantic inspiration for a zombie fest.

That was the greatest. I'm seriously thinking about any suggestions I might have, but can't think of anything to improve.

Kudos!!!

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If you haven't already thought - or you wondered if it would still be effective - I do think that if you're looking to save costs or just ease of delivery, this will totally work being emailed and video posted on Internet.

Wow! Your letter was most convincing. And the video is fantastic! I can't think of anything to suggest for improvement. You have certainly came up with a great idea being from the CDC. LOVE IT!!

THAT is awesome! You did such a great job. I love it! Wouldn't change a thing!

I'm speechless! Great job!!!!!!!

Awesome invites.

That might just be the awesomest thing that ever awesomed.





Awesome.

Originally Posted by mr_synical

That might just be the awesomest thing that ever awesomed.





Awesome.

Coming from a guy who calls himself Mr Synical, that means even more! Thanks!!!

I agree on the excellence! My only possible improvement, when I pull up that file there are just a couple sentences that bleed onto the 2nd page - could you condense it to 1 page? Like a resume, sometimes you only get the first page to catch their attention.

Is there a way you can make sure they watch the video FIRST? I think it sets up the theme better to see that THEN the letter - and it definitely kicks the excitement off earlier! I thought the letter was good, and came back later to click on the video - and that's the part that will knock their socks off!