Thread: invitation wording

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i have started working on my invites and would like an opinion of how it sounds

THE TIME HAS COME
TO BEWARE
MISCHIEF AND MAYHEM
ARE IN THE AIR
GHOSTLY SHADOWS
HAUNT THE NIGHT
TO FRIGHTEN
TIL THE MORNING LIGHT
SINISTER SURPRISES
DO ABOUND
JUST WAITING
TO BE FOUND
YOUNG AND OLD
DO TAKE CARE
DARKNESS LINGERS
EVERYWHERE
FOR THOSE WHO ENJOY
A GOOD SCARE
PLEASE...
JOIN US...
IF YOU
DARE!!

sounds good, very creative Kahlua. Tho it may flow a little better if you have ---
TO BE AWARE
FOR MISCHIEF AND MAYHEM
IS IN THE AIR

and

SINISTER SURPRISES
ALL AROUND
JUST WAITING
TO BE FOUND


Just my two cents

I like it Kahlua, it sounds great! What kind of invitation are you making?

I think it's great - very compelling! Are you doing an online invitation or the traditional mail ones?

Thanks for the input.
I'm doing both traditonal and online. For the moment I'm going with a haunted house theme , but i tend to change my mind at the last moment thinking there is always something better I could do.