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    Welcome to my garden
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    Welcome.
    Come on in
    To my garden of shadows
    See what grows within

    Black roses
    As far as the eye can see
    Twisting vines
    Wrapped around the trees

    Stone edge walls
    So tall and high
    Victims of the past
    Can you hear their cries?

    And heres the waterfall
    So crystal clear
    Gaze at your reflection
    In this river of tears

    Oh and look at the birds!
    Black ravens perched on a tree
    Inspecting their next victim
    They like what they see

    Follow the winding path
    Made of human bones
    Crunching beneath your feet
    Like small, fragile stones

    The best part is yet to come
    The highlight of my show
    Gravestones grey with age
    Peaceful visitors rest below

    Tall and looming trees
    Casting shadows everywhere
    Its easy to get lost here
    In my garden of despair

    You should stay longer
    Wait until its night
    The garden looks breath taking
    When bathed in the moon's light

    The fountain of blood
    Is over there to your right
    Isn't it wonderful?
    Such a beautiful sight

    Why do you look scared?
    Don't you like it here?
    People always seem to
    Treat my garden with fear

    I haven't finished the tour
    See there's the old stone well
    My sister was playing there
    And accidentally fell

    Its so cold & damp
    And such a long way down
    My little sisters body
    Was never even found

    And look over at that tree
    See that wooden swing?
    My mother used to sit there
    Gaze at flowers and sing

    Its such a shame she fell
    And cracked her skull on the ground
    It was strange, when i buried her
    She was still making sounds

    My father tried to burn my garden
    What a silly thing to do
    He said that it was evil
    Now of course thats not true

    Hes with mother now
    Beneath this very ground
    Again another body
    That was nowhere to be found

    I haven't left my garden
    In many, many years
    I shall remain here till i die
    I will be buried right here

    My beautiful garden
    My only home
    Its only me here
    But I'm not alone
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    kprimm is offline livin Halloween every day
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    Very good job, has a creepy vibe to it when you really think about the words and being surrounded.....by plants.
    EVERY DAY TO ME IS HALLOWEEN!
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