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    I walk out my front door and what should i see , but this black cat staring back at me . He sits there with his dead gaze as if she can see through me , im spell bound her eyes a beautiful gold or bronze she looks as if shes lost and i say black cat where is your home she says i have no home ive gone astray could you please show me the way, so i give her a treat ,as we sit down to have something to eat i notice something stuck to her feet i say black cat what is that on your feet she says its miles and miles of wandering and looking for someone to meet and be a friend to me, these calases on my feet are many weary miles looking for a place to retreat to rest my weary feet and i have found a home now my friend you are so sweet to take me in when everyone else i meet , has turned me away so i think ill stay if i may. And i say yes you may so friends we stay today and forever untill eternity me and my dark guardian an angel.
    I am every where , and iam knowhere , but i will always be watching
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    marc, cool poem. my sister lives in the country and has 46 acres. people are always dumping cats and dogs there. she has 16 stray cats and 3 dogs. all refugees. everyone of them has a name. at night they all have to go into the barn so the coyotes won't get them.
    ? coulrophobia ?
    don't laugh, this fear is contagious

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    Very nice poem!! I'm not sure, but it seems to be a metaphor perhaps about a person rather than an actual cat. In any case, it's very thought provoking!

    Did you write it?
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    Yes i wrote it Thank you for comment
    I am every where , and iam knowhere , but i will always be watching
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