Choose your own adventure!!
I feel like making some popcorn, can you just station yourself here to keep constantly writing?, this is a KILLER start!!
My vote is to keep moving in the room you are in...maybe you'll find some clues telling you more about your situation/surroundings--and why rush toward what has put you in mortal danger?
Thread: And Now It Begins!!
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06-01-2008,03:11 PM
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06-02-2008,02:00 PM
Quietly I slipped past the opening and pressed my back to the wall again. I listened for any movement but all was quiet. Step by step I made my way until with my hand I felt a window. I breathed a silent sigh of relief, if I could just open the window very quietly and drop to the ground, then I would be free. I pulled away the frayed curtain and felt for the lock which was unlatched. The payne of glass was dark I could not see anything outside. Slowly I put the candle closer to the window. It was horrible the whole window from the outside was engulfed in some writhing red bloodly mass. It was wet and pulsing and as I stared dumbfounded it began making a strange sucking noise. I immediately stepped back and nearly fell over something I caught myself just in time it was a table, a dinning room table and all the chairs were knocked over and askew. It looked as if it were set for dinner fancy glasses and plates even food but it looked strange and I couldnt quite figure out why it looked funny it was.......moving...I looked closer and strained my eyes, then I understood it was swarming with maggots and bugs of all kinds. I put my hand to my mouth to stifle a gag and then felt something against my leg. Instantly I put my candle down to see what it was and this time I did scream for there on the floor was a corpse swarming with maggots all I could see for a brief moment was the white blue glisten of a putrid eye. I jumped back and hit the wall and went quickly along it and I found myself at another opening this time it was a small door.
Do I explore more of this room? Open the small door or go back to the large opening?Wild winds thalt shall blow Carry away my saddened soul Tis the time of judgment
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06-02-2008,02:05 PM
Just so you know there are things hidden all over the place in this story...I already have it all figured out.....there is something to solve.....evil grin I of course can tell you nothing but you should pay attention to most everything you see......good luck and hope you enjoy it...I know You are Laurie I can see you smiling!!!
Wild winds thalt shall blow Carry away my saddened soul Tis the time of judgment
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06-02-2008,02:44 PM
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I mean, what?? I'm not smiling, ahem!......

Open the small door! Can't have you staying in that room now that we know there's a maggoty corpse with a putrid eye in there, ACK!
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06-02-2008,05:31 PM
OPEN THE SMALL DOOR!!!
Draco dormiens nunquam titillandus
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06-03-2008,04:27 AM
Ditto......let's see what is behind door #2.
"No one lives any nearer than town. No one will come any nearer than that...in the night...in the dark."
Watch my Pumpkin Patch grow on my Halloween Forum Blog
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And now it Begins –
06-03-2008,09:57 AM
I stared at the door. Just a simple wooden door with a round metal knob. I realized I was scared to open it. After the horrible things I had just discovered
not knowing what lay on the other side of the door stopped me cold. What if it were something worse? I thought again of the feasting maggots and got the courage to turn the knob. Slowly it turned and I heard the lock click, now or never I thought, and pushed the door open. Nothing jumped at me I walked a step or two over the threshold and listened, waited for several minuets before I dared breathe. From the candles light I could see I was in a kitchen. I could just make out the looming shapes of a fridge, stove, cabinets and drawers, and sink. I couldnt see more than that by the candle. I walked forward and something brushed against my face at once I brushed at it thinking it some insect or worse, but it turned out to be a string for the light in the kitchen.
Do I turn on the light? Search the kitchen? or Move on? Tell me what I should do here....Wild winds thalt shall blow Carry away my saddened soul Tis the time of judgment
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06-03-2008,12:16 PM
Oh Lord.....
Turn on the light, search the kitchen.....your enemy would know you're there from your candlelight anyway...
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06-03-2008,01:07 PM
Just popping in to let you all know I haven't forgotten about this. Just have some things going on at home that have made writing a bit difficult.
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06-03-2008,01:22 PM
I understand that, UnOrthodOx...we look forward to when you have a chance for it again...



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