Thread: Calling all you great story tellers...

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I am in need of some ideas and some great story tellers to help me write a story my haunt so I am posting this on my 2 favorite forums HALLOWEEN FOURM/HAUNT FOURM......As some of ya already know my haunt is an old run down prison which house some Zombie characters and classic horror characters.... I am in need of a good story that can be recorded to play over my Fm broadcast of the haunt...But I just don't know where to start never was much of a story teller but I know you guyz out here have some really great story line's for your haunt and I would love to be able to write something, but am just lost for words, I can build just about anything I put my mind to but when it comes to writing a story man I'm dumb lol... I thought it would be cool if I could get a few of you guyz out here to help me with the story and I can give credit back to the Forum/Forums, I thought that would be neat if we could all come up with something they combine it into one great story... If there is an interest I'll even get it professionally recorded from a friend of mine, he owes me one lol...And I can give you guyz a better idea of what I'm wanting to do....


Alright I will give you the run down on what I am looking to do and how my haunt look and what the characters look like...for you to get a better idea you can click on my banner and see what the haunt looks like....

For the most part my characters are a cross between humans that are (burnt up/cut up/shot up/beat up and bloodied) or like they were tortured....And then I guess you could say the others are Zombie looking but it goes with the look that I have been going for over the last few years also I have a few classic horror characters (Freddy, Jason, Leather Face, ext)...

Now as for the story what I want it for is to play it over my FM transmitter for the cars that drive by and have it play on a repeat there will be other sounds and stuff but I got that covered I just need a good story to tell...

Now as for what I want in the story I wasn't really sure but I did like a few ideas I got from midnight moon (How about this. The warden made the doctors preform experiments on the prisoners. Testing new treatment and drugs on them. using them as guinea pigs. the experiments went terribly wrong, and transformed the prisoners into these horrifying creatures.)I really like this and think this is what I want to build on, but I also like Gravestalker2 ideas
( assuming it's very old - maybe it has a museum of famous inmates (monsters) that were once held captive there. You could give a very short history of those individuals.)
(If it's abandoned/condemned tell stories of late night encounters: noises, lights flickering, cell doors closing etc.) now with these ideas I think maby we can move ahead but how do I start this and get the ball rolling...

Now as for me I am not sure I have some ideas but I would like to see what sort of input I can get from you guyz and then add my ideas and finally write the stor of DONOVAN VILLE PENITENTIARY....

ALL ideas are more then welcomed and if I can get a few good story writers maby we can all collaborate and writ one hell of a 2/3 min. story...

...A radio voice crackles as if transmitted through a walkie talkie:

"...can't really see WHAT'S going on, John. Are you SURE this is where the disturbance was reported?"

Another voice, through walkie talkie:

John:
"Yea. The Warden said to check it out, but when he called he didn't say which cell. Better check out the whole floor Sam."

Sam:

"The whole floor? Are you kidding? You know, when this is over I'm gonna get me a sweet piece of..."

Thumping metallic noise, quite loud.

Sam:

"What the hell was that?" Sam pants as if running.

John:

"You see anything Sam?

Screaming through walkie talkie.

John:

"Sam? Sam? SAM!! What the..."

More screaming heard then static.


Voice over of host:

"That was the last recorded transmission heard from the Donovanville Penitentiary. No other first hand records exist of the tragedy that occurred here at the prison, however many eyewitness accounts do attribute most of the horrors that occurred here to one man. Warden Harvey Gladstone. Purported to be the one solely responsible for the horrific experiments on the prisoners here, enlisting some of the most brilliant yet insane minds to perform tortuous alterations to the inmates brains in order to fulfill whatever sick fantasies he harbored..but to what purpose? Know one knows for sure, but many believe it was to raise an army of the dead...or UNDEAD...MWahahahaha!

Perhaps you should see for yourself. For I cannot divulge too much. What would be the fun in that? Mwahahahaha.

So enter. If you dare. The Donovanville Prison awaits your arrival. Perhaps YOU can solve the mystery of Warden Gladstone's insanity..Or, perhaps...you may end up as one of it's...guests?

MAhahahahaha!

Dr Morbius your the man!!!!! That is exactly what I had in mind but I could never write something like that of the top of my head...I love what you wrote it's the perfect starting point for me I think if we added a little more history or something a few scary tales first then the walkie talkie thing might work let me know what you think and if any one else has ideas let me know......this is going to be freaking great....

You're welcome. If I think of anything else I'll let you know.