Hey.... My frist Halloween web site... HELP

**liuoliveira** · 05-19-2009,04:31 PM

The Haunted Yard on Fay Blvd

All please give me Little help ... Comment about my site ...

Good , Bad or Need more details

THANKS ALL

**Fiend4Halloween** · 05-19-2009,04:34 PM

Looks good. Good pics, props and I hope you get a lot of TOT's.

**KING'S CRYPT** · 05-19-2009,04:37 PM

Nice!! I think the site looks great the way it is

**liuoliveira** · 05-19-2009,05:05 PM

Thanks Fiend4Halloween's and KING'S CRYPT

**nightrideproductions** · 05-19-2009,05:13 PM

It looks great. Its pleasant to look at, and gets the point across easily.

**liuoliveira** · 05-19-2009,05:39 PM

Thanks nightrideproductions I love Your website too....

**ZombieRaider** · 05-19-2009,05:57 PM

On your location page I LOVE that picture....It's almost like a contemporary Norman Rockwell type of art!......ZR

**TK421** · 05-19-2009,06:08 PM

Ok, I like what you've done so far, but here are a few thoughts...

1) The text on your home page is not as clean as it could be. I would suggest a line break <BR> between the picture and the beginning of the text.

2) I like the blood text bits, but I would suggest two things; center the titles and put them on a black background to match the background of the page.

3) The pictures page is great, but could you add some captions or ALT text to give a little more information?

4) The location page is great. Is that a picture of your real house? If so, your house is fantastic!!

5) The Behind The Scenes page looks good, but I don't really get a "behind the scenes" feel. Similar to the pictures page, some captions or ALT text might provide some insight.

Ok, those are my initial thoughts. Again, I like what you've done and I like the fact that you have actually taken the initiative to put something out there! your colors and general layout are solid. Some more text would give visitors more information and insight regarding your haunt.

**kittyvibe** · 05-19-2009,06:14 PM

I love the look of your site, the buttons with the little spiders are so cute. I do design and theres one thing thats an absolute must if your going to put yourself out there is to make sure you have your words completed and if using punctuation to keep it consistent. I think your props page could use more pics, perhaps do it gallery style would be great (and saves on bandwidth). The font your using for the page dividers is awesome, where did you get it? I keep trying to click on them (like enter if you dare) haha, I think theres something there, but nothing happens :P

Examples of what I mean are as follows;
on homepage -
"Or Halloween yard haunt display is composed of glowing jack-o'-lanterns , decorations props , fog machines , and lighting effects . "

I think you meant "Our Halloween yard", comma needed bewteen decorations and props.

On Behind the scenes page-

"Halloween has always bee our favorite holiday, and having a yard haunt is the best part."

forgot the last letter on been.

On halloween links page-
"I would like to thank the following people for their help my inspiration ."

Perhaps you meant to make it say "for their helping with my inspirations"?

I wish for more pictures

Everything else is just awesome, looks great! Wish I could come see it in person

Psst..TK421 , I just viewed your site. I love the animated pumpkins and the overall design. Did you do it yourself?